diff --git a/docs/_posts/2021-05-31-luau-recap-may-2021.md b/docs/_posts/2021-05-31-luau-recap-may-2021.md
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@@ -44,7 +44,7 @@ Speaking of typechecking, we've implemented many improvements this month:
 
 We've also added new checks to our linter:
 * A new check will report uses of deprecated Roblox APIs
-* We will warn for global functions that are defined inside local functions
+* Linter will now suggest replacing globals with locals in more cases
 * New warning is generated if array loop starts or ends on index '0', but the array is indexed from '1'
 * FormatString lint will now check string patterns for `find`/`match` calls via `:` when object type is known to be a string
 
@@ -60,9 +60,9 @@ As part of this work we will improve the type information provided by Roblox API
 
 ## Behavior changes
 
-We've made an improvement for an error message, when a relational comparison fails at runtime, we now specify the comparison direction in the error message (e.g. `attempt to compare nil <= number`)
+When a relational comparison fails at runtime, the error message now specifies the comparison direction (e.g. `attempt to compare nil <= number`)
 
 ## Performance improvements
 
-* Improved performance of table lookup with an index operator and a string: `t["name"]`
+* Improved performance of table lookup with an index operator and a literal string: `t["name"]`
 * Bytecode compilation is now ~5% faster which can improve server startup time for games with lots of scripts